2nde13 - Correction du Devoir

Publié le par Mister Hattais

Hey everyone!



I hope you liked the correction today at the lab! The inspectors were glad of what we've acheived together!

Congratulations!

You can continue to correct yourselves thanks to the online document if you didn't have time in class.
You may click here to fill in the questionnaire and note down your missing answers.

As I told you, I want you to propose a correction on the Internet for Questions #7, 8, and 9.
You just have to press on "Commentaires" at the bottom of this message to edit your entries.
Don't forget to put your names in your answers and to respect the "netiquette", i.e. don't be stupid or this type of exercises will never be possible again.

Thanks and see you on Wednesday.
Mister Hattais

PS: Rappel de Homework = Remplir la fiche "Bilan de compétences" et pour les "leaders" du groupe 1, me rendre au propre ce que vous aurez fait + pour le groupe 2, Amélie me rendra également le travail spécifique que son groupe avait à réaliser + Evidemment pour tout le monde = Répondre aux questions # 7, 8, et 9 sur le blog!

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DianaA
31/01/2006 23:50
Question 7 : This sentence reveals that Jérôme Collet seems to make people scared. People think he is a very important and authoritative personn. <br /> Question 8 : l.47 'We found your name in his daily planner'<br /> Question 9 : Collet's capitaine wants to see Langdom because maybe he can help him to know why Mr. Saunière killed himself.<br /> <br /> pardon pour le retard!!
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Mister Hattais
01/02/2006 07:50
Diana, <br /> very good answers. Just pay attention to your spelling sometimes (cf. person or Langdon). <br /> Good job! <br /> Ps: Shouldn't you be asleep at this hour of the night...?
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*Le$Lie*
31/01/2006 21:34
Question 7: Collet gives an impression of authority and he is determinated.<br /> Question 8: "We found your name in his daily planner" .<br /> Question 9: Collet's capitain wants to meet Langdon because his thinks Langdon have killed Saunière.
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Mister Hattais
31/01/2006 22:40
Ok Leslie, <br /> good answers but your grammar needs improving. Cf. "determined"Cf. Landgon has killed Saunière (mieux encore = may have killed Saunière)
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gayané
31/01/2006 21:09
question7: Jérôme Collet makes an impression of authority.<br /> question8: "we found your name in his daily planner"<br /> question9: Collet's captain wants to see Langdon because he thinks that he killed Saunière.
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Mister Hattais
31/01/2006 21:17
Good job! Pour améliorer cela encore, il faudrait penser à développer davantage ses idées mais c'est déjà bien. Pour la réponse #9, tu pourrais mieux dire en utilisant un modal (au passé). cf. He thinks he might have killed Saunière.<br /> See you 
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Emeline
31/01/2006 19:38
question7: Collet gives the impression be authority, severe and not awkward.<br /> question 8: l:46 Yes, how did you know that ? We found your name in his daily planner<br /> question9: Collets's capitaine wants to see Langdon in order to talk with him of Sauniere and the capitaine hopes that Langdon helps the DCPJ
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Mister Hattais
31/01/2006 20:55
Emeline, correct answers. Attention cependant à ne pas mélanger les catégories grammaticales (tu ne peux pas dire que qqn qu'il est "severe" (nom) "auhority" (adj)!) et à faire des phrases qui soient syntaxiquement correctes (Collet gives the impression OF beING severe" par exemple. Keep up!
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Severine
31/01/2006 19:12
7) The concierge can't stop Collet because he is so determined.<br /> 8) (L.48)"We found your name in his daily planner"<br /> 9) Capitaine wants to see Langdon because his name is in the daily planner of Sauniere.
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Mister Hattais
31/01/2006 20:55
Séverine, ta réponse à la question #7 n'est pas tout à fait dans le sujet. Il faudrait mieux la formuler. On demande ce que cela révèle sur Jérôme Collet et là tu réponds à la question : "Pourquoi le concierge ne peut-il pas arrêter Jérôme Collet". La question #9 serait à développer davantage mais l'idée principale s'y trouve bien. Keep up!